All this time the third stranger had stood in the doorway, and now everyone turned to look at him. They saw to their surprise that his face was white, his hands were shaking, and his eyes were fixed in horror on the man in grey. A moment later he turned, and ran away into the darkness and the rain 去书内

  • SweetNothing SweetNothing

    This is a pretty vivid descipition of a frightened man, from the outfit to the face. The whole sentence builds a very concrete image of a man, and also brings more confusion to the readers and makes the reader eager to figure out who the man is.

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