rescue
高伊洋
The narrator crashed in the Desert of Sahara because something was
broken in his engine, sadly, he had neither a passenger to talk with nor
a mechanic to repair the engine, what made the situation worse was that
he only got water last for a week to drink. Here, in the midst of
Sahara, a thousand miles from any human habitation, the night was colder
and dryer than all the places I have ever been to. finding no shelter to
sleep in, he lay on the sand at night. The sand was as soft as a bed;
numerous stars glittered as if they were winked to him. The narrator got
a sacred and peaceful feeling from the bottom of his heart, completely
putting life and death aside.
回复(共2条)
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张琪悦但是其中缺少救援方法的描写,而且其中人称转化有点问题,前面用了he,后面用的I。建议协调统一一下。
2021-12-24
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张琪悦作者在描述主人公落入到撒哈拉之后,对于环境的描写十分优美并写详细,想象力十分丰富。还运用了修辞手法,例如“as soft as a bed”,生动形象的再现了当时的情景,让人仿佛置身其中。
2021-12-24