抒情方式及例证
MYH
scene:1.His glasses went flying, and I saw them land in the grass about
ten feet from him.(annoyed) 2.He had planned to kill himself on the
weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his mom
wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff
home.(astonished) 3.I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this
handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. I saw his
mom and dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile.
(touched) act:1.so I shrugged my shoulders and went on.(ridicule) 2.He
looked up and I saw this terrible sadness in his eyes. My heart went out
to him. So, I jogged over to him and as he crawled around looking for
his glasses I saw tears in his eyes.(sympathy) 3.As I was walking, I saw
a bunch of kids running toward him. They ran at him, knocking all his
books out of his arms and tripping him so he landed in the dirt. (angry)
speech:1.As I handed him his glasses, I said, “Those guys are jerks.
They really should get lives.” He looked at me and said, “Hey
thanks!”(be relieved) 2.I stopped him and said, “Damn boy, you are gonna
really build some serious muscles with this pile of books everyday!
”(Joking) 3.“Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the
unspeakable.”(move) 4.So, I smacked him on the back and said, “Hey, big
guy, you’ll be great!” He looked at me with one of those looks (the
really grateful one) and smiled. “Thanks!” he said. (cheerful)
inner:world:1.He had more dates than me and all the girls loved him!
Boy, sometimes I was jealous.(envy) 2.I knew that we would always be
friends, that the miles would never be a problem.(be gratified) 3. I
thought to myself, “Why would anyone bring home all his books on a
Friday? He must really be a nerd.”(banter)
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