MYH

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MYH
scene:1.His glasses went flying, and I saw them land in the grass about ten feet from him.(annoyed) 2.He had planned to kill himself on the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his mom wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home.(astonished) 3.I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. I saw his mom and dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. (touched) act:1.so I shrugged my shoulders and went on.(ridicule) 2.He looked up and I saw this terrible sadness in his eyes. My heart went out to him. So, I jogged over to him and as he crawled around looking for his glasses I saw tears in his eyes.(sympathy) 3.As I was walking, I saw a bunch of kids running toward him. They ran at him, knocking all his books out of his arms and tripping him so he landed in the dirt. (angry) speech:1.As I handed him his glasses, I said, “Those guys are jerks. They really should get lives.” He looked at me and said, “Hey thanks!”(be relieved) 2.I stopped him and said, “Damn boy, you are gonna really build some serious muscles with this pile of books everyday! ”(Joking) 3.“Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable.”(move) 4.So, I smacked him on the back and said, “Hey, big guy, you’ll be great!” He looked at me with one of those looks (the really grateful one) and smiled. “Thanks!” he said. (cheerful) inner:world:1.He had more dates than me and all the girls loved him! Boy, sometimes I was jealous.(envy) 2.I knew that we would always be friends, that the miles would never be a problem.(be gratified) 3. I thought to myself, “Why would anyone bring home all his books on a Friday? He must really be a nerd.”(banter)
2023-10-25
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