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书评 行文简洁， 名词动词 1名词无用词包括包含关系（多余词为后面名词种类或名词意思重叠），名词在句子没有补充意义（删除前后句子意思不变名词），应删去。"The phenomena of" = unnec. category noun.2动词无用词可以是make等不重要的，把动词修饰的有意义的名词改为动词，没意义的名词一起删了。动词要注意逻辑，比如规定做某事和做好规定的某事是两个不同的东西。（不重要的v+不重要的n+重要n→重要n变v）3有时候被动更自然。4可以换主语。5时间词不重要的可以去掉6.various很多时候可以去掉。 修饰词 6.形容词意思有重叠可以去掉。很肯定的可以去掉，比如进口可以把国外的去掉，因为不可能进口国内的。注意不要用大程度副词修饰弱形容词，要直接用程度大的形容词7.副词和其他内容重叠可以去掉。-"Actively" is redundant because you can't promote anything passively.废话也可以不要8.少用限定词 "quite," "rather," and "relatively."，显得犹豫不明确。9."perhaps," "maybe," and "possibly" (or "possible")—which, even when they are perfectly legitimate, are often unnecessary.neatly replaced by "may" or "might.